Week 9 Advisor Session

Tanya's Feedback

• The illustration style is looking great but the animation needs to be pushed further - it needs to be far more dramatic and unrealistic to be humorous and attention grabbing.
• Refer back to Thelwell for examples of how to make the relationship between the pony and rider have more tension and how to give the horse more of personality.
• Definitely don't try to make 9 gifs - aim for 3!
• Make the gifs last slightly longer - tell more of the story, set up what happens before the car passes the horse and show more of what happens afterwards.
• Make your scenarios look very high risk for the riders!
• The text is a bit hard to read so make it stand out more.
• Don't use a square canvas, make it a wide rectangle as that is the most common image shape used on social media.