Last weekend I finished writing my proposal and laying it out on InDesign which makes me feel a lot less stressed about the whole thing. This will allow me to dedicate this weekend to furthering my own design work for in my proposal which I am happy about as I have not had time to focus on that aspect of my project since the super crit. This week I have been trying to share my proposal with as many people as possible to get as much feedback as I can, in the hopes of improving my writing to a high level. So far I have shared it with; lots of peers (I get them on board with reading my near 5000 word document by suggesting a swap-meet where we read each others proposals!), my mum, dad, and sister, and I also returned to see Martha at the Centre for Teaching and Learning. So far no one has suggested any areas that need to be condensed (where I waffle), or where it needs to be expanded on (because it doesn't make sense). The only things people have found are very small spelling and ...