Meeting With Caroline

Feedback Notes

  • Be consistent, use full stops after each heading on your website (except maybe the first one)
  • That first paragraph on the website sets up what drivers should do and then the others are just variations depending on different circumstances
  • Put a few more cows in the website illustrations to balance the sheep
  • See if you can talk to Tariq Habibyar (Centre of Teaching and Learning) to find out whether people from overseas would be able to understand my website
  • Remember to have an instructional tone