Meeting With Tariq Habibyar

Feedback Notes

• Likes my tone acknowledges that people are unfamiliar (not evil!)
• People are often more likely to remember good behaviour when they have had a close call, so your animation could be like the ‘close call’ moment for them
• Make it something memorable that will immediately pop into their head next time they come across a horse on the road
• Immigrants are inundated with so much information when they come to New Zealand in order to help them acclimatise - how can you make yours stand out?
• Tourists may lightly look into the country they are visiting in preparation, how do you make your work something they want to investigate further?
• Make it fun and exciting, attention catching
• Use more illustrations in your website rather than text (so reduce your paragraph sizes) as people respond more to visual/don’t have time to spend reading/are more likely to share or recommend a fun website
• Really try and inform/remind people that there are three brains at work - making the horse a key character
• Perhaps show the good behaviour and the bad?
• Illustrating the consequences of unsafe behaviour is powerful
• Let people know why a horse will react, so why they are being asked to behave differently than they might with a cyclist for example
• Do I need facts about tourists and immigrants/migrants to NZ in my presentation?